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My Essay plan
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- Start
- Give examples or say why some stars are paid too much .. what about other people, their work is important too (about 70 words)
- Main part
- Give my opinion. People decide how much is enough because they won't pay more - $100 for a cinema ticket? I think not. Also only a few people earn big money - lots of poor actors too. Stars are an inspiration. (about 110 words)
- Conclusion
- We pay, so we dont think it is too much (the rest)
Essay
IELTS Writing
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